tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3814167885275431107.post2184472578370638926..comments2023-06-26T11:01:03.582-02:30Comments on A Blade of Grass: Jonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07415555531504843017noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3814167885275431107.post-26493296124003797372009-06-11T06:03:50.027-02:302009-06-11T06:03:50.027-02:30Fantastic!Fantastic!bardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15130589527012329455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3814167885275431107.post-55277093494556662992009-06-04T04:38:35.466-02:302009-06-04T04:38:35.466-02:30:D:Dhuman beinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09232419187783429903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3814167885275431107.post-42722986114399593962009-06-04T00:04:25.803-02:302009-06-04T00:04:25.803-02:30HB
thanks...
had a particular friend in mind thi...HB<br /><br />thanks...<br /><br />had a particular friend in mind thinking about this diamond too...Jonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07415555531504843017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3814167885275431107.post-69938215661548116072009-06-03T16:37:54.831-02:302009-06-03T16:37:54.831-02:30diamondiam
i liked this line...
because for each...diamondiam<br /><br /><br />i liked this line...<br />because for each reader the image is different...<br />:)<br /><br />a well-cut piece of jewel... this work is!human beinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09232419187783429903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3814167885275431107.post-30486510273722516242009-05-19T10:58:00.000-02:302009-05-19T10:58:00.000-02:30Shubhajit,
perhaps it could be her eyeglass
balan...Shubhajit,<br /><br />perhaps it could be her eyeglass<br />balanced there<br />on a blade of....<br /><br /><br />P I,<br /><br />Thanks for dropping by and for your praise. Shape is fun to work with...Jonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07415555531504843017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3814167885275431107.post-91004217699904924652009-05-15T11:53:00.000-02:302009-05-15T11:53:00.000-02:30Love the diamond on a blade of grass - great idea!...Love the diamond on a blade of grass - great idea!Garthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15637097897454660933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3814167885275431107.post-83899859537157135462009-05-15T05:16:00.000-02:302009-05-15T05:16:00.000-02:30Mother balanced a diamond on the blade of grass.
...Mother balanced a diamond on the blade of grass. <br /><br />We will all lost but mother not.SHUBHAJIThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07922572955753398337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3814167885275431107.post-83090589601670600622009-05-12T17:04:00.000-02:302009-05-12T17:04:00.000-02:30Hi Christopher...
thanks for this poem... after y...Hi Christopher...<br /><br />thanks for this poem... after your recent experience I can see where some of the imagery in this comes from... hope you're feeling better these last few days and thanks for stopping by<br /><br />Harle,<br /><br />you know how interested I am in form and shape of words and ideas... wonder how the two can work together... how series of forms or words might tell a story... there's gotta be a story there somewhere...<br /><br />Walking man,<br /><br />was it dew or was it a breeze... does it rustle or drip..<br />.<br />.<br />.<br />.<br /><br /><br />adee,<br /><br />been a while... nice to hear from you again... I like how you've crafted these lines... especially the slant rhyme in the first stanza and how you've left the word "still" on its own, punctuated softly and made to pause... thanks for thisJonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07415555531504843017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3814167885275431107.post-23959879357519146932009-05-12T06:30:00.000-02:302009-05-12T06:30:00.000-02:30diamonds on a blade of grass
remind me of children...diamonds on a blade of grass<br />remind me of children smiling<br />telling me, all is not lost<br />hope there is, still<br /><br />diamonds on a blade of grass<br />speak to me of riches infinite<br />neglected in this fleeting world<br />but believe me, hope there is, stilldelhidreamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04613041484425960760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3814167885275431107.post-553474059249793962009-05-12T05:43:00.000-02:302009-05-12T05:43:00.000-02:30I wonder at the weight of the dew as it bends the ...I wonder at the weight of the dew as it bends the grass blade.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3814167885275431107.post-78973617173177812222009-05-12T00:18:00.000-02:302009-05-12T00:18:00.000-02:30diamond you are...yes indeed;
nice lyrics and a s...diamond you are...yes indeed; <br />nice lyrics and a sweet variation on a theme...<br />and, I quite like how you work with words and shapes to convey both image and mood...nicely doneHarlequinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04964772119118368322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3814167885275431107.post-5646821419413566592009-05-11T01:06:00.000-02:302009-05-11T01:06:00.000-02:30Diamonds Everywhere
Diamonds in skies,
diamonds ...<B>Diamonds Everywhere</B> <br /><br />Diamonds in skies,<br />diamonds on souls of shoes,<br />diamonds on blades<br />of green green grasses,<br />in my eyes and heart, my heart,<br />slicing my heart til it aches<br />and I wake up then<br />with this real bad ache<br />and call them up...<br /><br />they say come on in.<br />My heart<br />removed, replaced with<br />stainless steel strapping<br />and bitter powders.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.com