Tuesday, September 27, 2011
Lock
ubiquitous
but unseen
unless you're kept in or out
so mundane it's something you can't pick
such a simple expression of how we live
but unseen
unless you're kept in or out
so mundane it's something you can't pick
such a simple expression of how we live
metal
met...............alm
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met....................alm
eta.....................lme
tal.....................met
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the things we keep
and the things we give
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and the things we give
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7 comments:
And a song, sure, why not. (Pardon the ad if you get it.)
pin pin!
sure...why not ( the song, i mean)
the shape and word interplay are quite compelling. it's one of those poems that gives over more on each read... those things you give.
great to see this lovely juxtapose of wildness and precision...
Lovely. This is my second favorite after 'Ketchup'. Even it is better than that because of its mystical and profound message.
I also start learning this..Its a different art..
You appear to have a lot of free time.
I love your constructions Jon! This one is very strong.
Jon you have some wonderful work up i wish i can be as good someday
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