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14 comments:
wow-- what a great shape poem... and the lyrics are ghoulish and gruesome... and so effective at conveying image and mood; hardly the inky dinky spider climbing up the water spout.....this was lots of fun to read, like following the circuitous path of some intrepid little creature.
spiders are not my particular phobia, but i have enough of them (phobias, not spiders) that i can empathize
:))
I didn't have patience to read all the legs. I don't spell well so had to sound out these word strings which is not easy for me. I guess I am word challenged. LOL
Like the part I did read though!
Honest Lynn
i'm in awe just wondering how this was written....jon you have almost depicted your own spider-y instincts.....this feels like a web...once you go in...its hard to trace the same words backward...some people (including me) would find it difficult to even put it in a nutshell so to speak...using words...and to top it off....u actually made one (the spider)...brilliant..
namaste!
tke cre.....
spiderman spiderman friendly neighborhood spiderman!
had to sing it!!
N
What a lovely way to express
the internet poetically
... even IF it is kind of creepy etc ;-)
the internet I mean ha ha ha
What a great artwork, I really like visual poetry (I think you can call it like it), well I like it when is good, like this one, it shows you where inspired
your talent never ceases to amaze me.. hope you are loving every moment of home. xo zoo
I'm not even going to bother to try reading it, I have better things to do with my time.
Did you really do that or did you just find it and do a copy/paste?
I'll be posting boating pictures in the morning, if you would like a lot at what some of this area is like.
That's amazing! I'm really impressed. Hope you keep posting!
Peace,
y
http://yolandabarkersblog.blogspot.com/
v.cool!
/t.
wonderful weave!
Hello everybody. Thanks a lot for the comments and for reading. I've been away from this space for a while but hope to be more regularly posting soon. Best wishes to all...
Jon
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