I see these elements upside down
umbrella
adrift
eddy-currents
undertow
ring-bills
circling
downdraft
water
infused
air
stone
l
e
z
n
u
p
a
R
ties
hair
wind
turning
fabric
frame
handle
twisting
shoulders
giants
step as the rain comes up
to empty this bowl to the brim
4 comments:
i've
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a
l
l
e
n
but
p
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g
n
i
o
g
i'm
.
.
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i lose to win...
i empty to brim...
Why
f
a
l
l
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Why
k
c
a
b
k
o
o
l
?
Flow with the river.
Oh crap, my second question mark is in the wrong place. Imagine it between the k and Why...there, makes more sense.....ha ha ha ha.
beautiful last couplet.
twisting shoulders of giants is a rocking phrase too.
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