Thursday, May 15, 2008

Falls

I see these elements upside down

umbrella
adrift
eddy-currents
undertow
ring-bills
circling
downdraft

water
infused
air
stone

l
e
z
n
u
p
a
R

ties

hair

wind

turning

fabric

frame

handle

twisting

shoulders

giants

step as the rain comes up
to empty this bowl to the brim

4 comments:

human being said...

i've
f
a
l
l
e
n
but
p
u
g
n
i
o
g
i'm
.
.
.
i lose to win...
i empty to brim...

Debra Kay said...

Why
f
a
l
l
?
Why
k
c
a
b
k
o
o
l
?
Flow with the river.

Debra Kay said...

Oh crap, my second question mark is in the wrong place. Imagine it between the k and Why...there, makes more sense.....ha ha ha ha.

Pearl said...

beautiful last couplet.
twisting shoulders of giants is a rocking phrase too.